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    (part of an ongoing reduction of necessary words - I think)

    .



    how
    still

    the
    hill

    how
    still

    the
    tomb

    beneath

    the
    hill

    how
    still

    the
    hill

    how
    still




    .




    how
    still

    the
    hill

    how
    still

    the
    furrows

    circling

    circling

    the
    burrow

    how
    still

    the
    hill

    how
    still

    the
    furrows

    how
    still
    .

  • #2
    Wonderful, jshb!

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    • #3
      Very effective, I like the rhythm.
      ghost cave i brush aside the dharma of a lobster god

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      • #4
        so so good
        https://underneaththebloominglaburnu...m/p/books.html

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        • jshb
          jshb commented
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          thanks, Michael ... and potentially endless ;-)
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