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  • speculation rises
    over six-toed footprints
    on the meteor

    polly wanna dactyl
    Kilimanjaro shrinking

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    • polly wanna dactyl
      Kilimanjaro shrinking

      higgledy piggledy
      lower Antarctica
      melting away in a blink of the eye
      ghost cave i brush aside the dharma of a lobster god

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      • higgledy piggledy
        lower Antarctica
        melting away in a blink of the eye

        rainbow colored gills
        a hit at the dance
        My website is at www.poeticinspire.com

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        • rainbow colored gills
          a hit at the dance

          trout lord
          the caviar served
          in f minor
          https://underneaththebloominglaburnu...m/p/books.html

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          • trout lord
            the caviar served
            in f minor

            supplications rendered
            before the eldritch throne
            ghost cave i brush aside the dharma of a lobster god

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            • supplications rendered
              before the eldritch throne

              scepter scepter
              in her hands —
              commercial break

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              • scepter scepter
                in her hands —
                commercial break

                tv static shiting out
                another young prince
                Last edited by Michael; 12-22-2019, 10:02 AM.
                https://underneaththebloominglaburnu...m/p/books.html

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                • Clayton Beach
                  Clayton Beach commented
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                  Can you edit this one to be a two line Michael? Sorry we like to keep the alternating 3-2-3-2... etc. rhythm. I might suggest:

                  scepter scepter
                  in her hands —
                  commercial break

                  tv static shiting out
                  another young prince

                • Michael
                  Michael commented
                  Editing a comment
                  my bad, clayton.

              • tv static shiting out
                another young prince

                long-lived
                after his mother
                a haiku master

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                • long-lived
                  after his mother
                  a haiku master

                  still so much
                  to unlearn

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                  • still so much
                    to unlearn

                    as always
                    the kitten's cliché
                    unspools
                    https://underneaththebloominglaburnu...m/p/books.html

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                    • as always
                      the kitten cliche
                      unspools

                      into dusk the world turns
                      stranger

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                      • into dusk the world turns
                        stranger

                        faces out of the rain
                        the strange urge to jump
                        as the train arrives
                        ghost cave i brush aside the dharma of a lobster god

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                        • faces out of the rain
                          the strange urge to jump
                          as the train arrives

                          steel on bone
                          a visceral indifference
                          https://underneaththebloominglaburnu...m/p/books.html

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                          • steel on bone
                            a visceral indifference

                            understood
                            by the old masters . . .
                            life going on

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                            • understood
                              by the old masters . . .
                              life going on

                              making it new
                              one mistake at a time
                              ghost cave i brush aside the dharma of a lobster god

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