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  • acme anvil
    the coyote's legs
    turn to water

    the rainbow layers
    of distant buttes
    ghost cave i brush aside the dharma of a lobster god

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    • the rainbow layers
      of distant buttes

      a head for heights
      the backward running clock
      strikes again

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      • head for heights
        the backward running clock
        strikes again




        steep white sheets-
        monogram splash through foams
        break to run

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        • Ray Caligiuri
          Ray Caligiuri commented
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          Radhamini, this renga uses alternating 3-line, 2-line format (see previous posts). Please rework yours to 2 lines. Thanks.


      • Dear Ray Caligiuri, as per your suggestion, here is my renga, reworked , humble attempt.


        a head for heights
        the backward running clock
        strikes again




        steep white sheets
        down to earth froths run to break

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        • steep white sheets
          down to earth froths run to break

          windswept echoes
          of the wine dark sea
          in her hair
          ghost cave i brush aside the dharma of a lobster god

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          • windswept echoes
            of the wine dark sea
            in her hair




            salmon upright
            fins to swim in dashing waves

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            • salmon upright
              fins to swim in dashing waves

              oscillating hands
              the crowd cheers
              another breakaway

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              • oscillating hands
                the crowd cheers
                another breakaway

                going viral
                his keepy up on a pogo stick

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                • going viral
                  his keepy up on a pogo stick

                  round and round
                  the coughing goes
                  bouncing off walls

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                  • round and round
                    the coughing goes
                    bouncing off walls

                    a distant echo sounds
                    with murmurs of the future

                    ghost cave i brush aside the dharma of a lobster god

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                    • a distant echo sounds
                      with murmurs of the future

                      humans
                      dropping like flies
                      on a shit run

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                      • humans
                        dropping like flies
                        on a shit run

                        of honeyed wind
                        his hairline
                        https://underneaththebloominglaburnu...m/p/books.html

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                        • of honeyed wind
                          his hairline

                          a gibbon howls
                          from the banyan tree
                          virus moon
                          ghost cave i brush aside the dharma of a lobster god

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                          • a gibbon howls
                            from the banyan tree
                            virus moon

                            six feet of monkey mind
                            shatters the past present

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                            • six feet of monkey mind
                              shatters the past present

                              mute witness
                              mounting the time piece
                              an ant
                              https://underneaththebloominglaburnu...m/p/books.html

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