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  • Robert Kingston
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    oscillating hands
    the crowd cheers
    another breakaway

    going viral
    his keepy up on a pogo stick

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  • Ray Caligiuri
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    salmon upright
    fins to swim in dashing waves

    oscillating hands
    the crowd cheers
    another breakaway

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  • Radhamani
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    windswept echoes
    of the wine dark sea
    in her hair




    salmon upright
    fins to swim in dashing waves

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  • Clayton Beach
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    steep white sheets
    down to earth froths run to break

    windswept echoes
    of the wine dark sea
    in her hair

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  • Radhamani
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    Dear Ray Caligiuri, as per your suggestion, here is my renga, reworked , humble attempt.


    a head for heights
    the backward running clock
    strikes again




    steep white sheets
    down to earth froths run to break

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  • Ray Caligiuri
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    Radhamini, this renga uses alternating 3-line, 2-line format (see previous posts). Please rework yours to 2 lines. Thanks.

  • Radhamani
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    head for heights
    the backward running clock
    strikes again




    steep white sheets-
    monogram splash through foams
    break to run

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  • Robert Kingston
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    the rainbow layers
    of distant buttes

    a head for heights
    the backward running clock
    strikes again

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  • Clayton Beach
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    acme anvil
    the coyote's legs
    turn to water

    the rainbow layers
    of distant buttes

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  • Michael
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    crutches bare the weight
    of a fourth piano drop

    acme anvil
    the coyote's legs
    turn to water

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  • Robert Kingston
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    the projector plays
    to an empty theater
    of the absurd

    crutches bare the weight
    of a fourth piano drop
    Last edited by Robert Kingston; 03-24-2020, 09:06 PM.

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  • Clayton Beach
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    muzzle flash
    the runner falls

    the projector plays
    to an empty theater
    of the absurd

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  • Ray Caligiuri
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    grand opus
    the bravura notes
    of a shot ringing out

    muzzle flash
    the runner falls

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  • John Hawkhead
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    rifling through old strings
    for her Stradivarius

    grand opus
    the bravura notes
    of a shot ringing out

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  • Robert Kingston
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    double shift
    working the bag
    a heavyweight

    rifling through old strings
    for her Stradivarius

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