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    I like the image and how it relates to your haiku Christina.
    I wonder if the repetition of S's overpowers the verse and the need for the reference to the clasp - it makes a compelling monoku

    iris scent my mothers pearl necklace

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    • #3
      Originally posted by haikuWANDArings View Post
      I like the image and how it relates to your haiku Christina.
      I wonder if the repetition of S's overpowers the verse and the need for the reference to the clasp - it makes a compelling monoku

      iris scent my mothers pearl necklace
      indeed, I simply felt the other way, but your idea is good, thanks

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