Photo-haiku

[Cristina1900]

[haikuWANDArings]

I like the image and how it relates to your haiku Christina.
I wonder if the repetition of S's overpowers the verse and the need for the reference to the clasp - it makes a compelling monoku

iris scent my mothers pearl necklace

[Cristina1900]

I like the image and how it relates to your haiku Christina.
I wonder if the repetition of S's overpowers the verse and the need for the reference to the clasp - it makes a compelling monoku

iris scent my mothers pearl necklace

indeed, I simply felt the other way, but your idea is good, thanks

[Cristina1900]